Score: 6

"Nothing too new or interesting."

submission: hugs are good

date: January 5, 2010

Nothing really much to this animation. Really wish you put more effort into this but with the amount of time you had nothing more you could have really done. The dialouge is mainly all this flash has going for it. There were a couple of chuckles in there but nothing to write home about.

The animation was dull and elementary and in parts the mouth didnt even move with the body even though this added to the hiliarity to the thing as a whole. The entire thing is just a joke intentional bad animation + moderately funny script = frontpage

Was really surprised that he didnt kill him and the ending was anticlimatic and it didnt satisfy my bloodlust. Oh well sugarpuffs.

2/5

Score: 9

"Wow Fantastic!"

submission: Dentist

date: November 14, 2009

Shame though I wished that you would have continued the story with Billy and the dentist rather then switching over to the back-story of just the dentist. It ended so abrubtly that it left be dissapointed but wanting more as well. I think you should have fleshed out the dentist's envolment with the girls and gave them a bigger part in the story (guessing you took the easy way out and ended it quickly eh? Am I right?)

It sounded like you were banging some glasses with spoons and whatnot and that just soooooo suits the sound of the dentist just hacking away at those poor peoples teeth Kudos! You made great use of the FX.

I really enjoyed your artwork it was dark and but had a nice use of shades of red in it which I think gave it a warm feel. The text was also a nice addition at times he was so quiet it really helped me follow along but points for keeping me very interested in the story it had a nice pace but too bad about the ending.

=)

Score: 1

"Phucking Fantastic Instructions"

submission: Cup Stacking

date: November 13, 2009

Oh how I love the instructions "The point of the game is to stack the cups as shown" Wow beautiful just beautiful. Now real instructions or hints or tips on how to best play the game left me frustrated and annoyed. You really need to find a better control scheme because dragging and dropping cups that rotate for no reall reason at all is just a terrible way to set it up. The golden rule is if someone cant pick it up and learn in 15 seconds its just terrible perhaps you should rethink your original concept

I would highly reccomend changing the control scheme to something a little less useless and frustrating. Cup stacking is supposed to be fairly easy ( I would assume so considering I use cups everyday) why cant this game be?

Score: 8

"GRRRRRRR"

submission: I Love My Bed

date: November 9, 2009

Damn I was totally expecting some sort of perverted bear sex joke or at least a cock joke and the most I get is a line that goes "...and all of those things people do"??? Very dissapointed... although a cute little song. Has a "homey" feel to it nothing too deep just a simple song about a guy who loves his bed nice choice. The animation was simple too but likeable I enjoyed your style and might I add those bears we're CREEPY!!!

Score: 4

"Could use more oomf"

submission: CopyMeDo

date: September 14, 2009

I liked the concept of a memory puzzle game. there was some replayability but after playing a little bit on both It wouldnt be a stretch of imagination to think that people would grow bored with it. Also whats with no sound? at least put on a loop of some short 10 second techno music, it would definitely make it more pleasing to play.

Perhaps you could also give the player chances per level or lives instead of having them instantly lose the game the first red they touch it makes it very frustrating that I have to go all the way back to the first level.

Nothing too new or interesting, 2 out of 5

Score: 7

"Wow I cant believe this isnt getting better scores"

submission: Spy & Scouts Mum elope

date: September 14, 2009

This flash needs to be at least in the 3 range. Yes theres not too much going on in the flash that would be note worthy for recommending to my friends to watch but it did give me a chuckle. could have used some more movement in it from your characters, it looked pretty much like just a bunch of stills sort of a comic book style I guess. anyways... better luck next time.

Score: 6

"Horrible just horrible =P"

submission: Oh Boy, Five Dollars

date: August 31, 2009

Wow its kinda fucked up but gave me a quick laugh. The Sunshine lollypops song fit the flash perfect! I'm a little dissapointed in the animation though... you obviously know how to do basic movements for characters and objects why dont you put some effort into it!?! Seriously could have been much better...

Score: 6

"Not at all where I was expecting that to go."

submission: The blade

date: August 31, 2009

Darn I was tottally expecting either a tragic ending like the man killing himself or an inspirational message of some sorts. HA! guess not. But I guess I liked it up to that point. I was actually feeling for the main character even though you were telling us what was happening rather then showing it... If it had a bit more actual storyline to it and a fitting ending I suppose this could be more then just a quick laugh.

If you ever attempt to flesh this out I would come back to watch it.

Score: 8

"Love your Interpretation"

submission: Rainbowball of Doom

date: August 31, 2009

This take on macs is a cute little flash (yes I said cute). Although it wasnt outrageously funny it did make me chuckle. Kudos for that I suppose.

The flash was very well drawn but for some reason it looked like it was blocky or pixilated in some parts I wouldnt know how you would fix this but if there is a way I would suggest doing so... also perhaps making the colors a little bit more vibrant would compliment the flash. (yes I know these are the standard colors for mac but just a suggestion =)

Very nice I loved it and favorited.

Score: 7

"Not much to Creatures"

submission: Paranormal Creatures

date: August 31, 2009

Paranormal Creatures was an interesting short. Not much of a storyline or plot but I suppose it has some personal meaning to you.

The score was quite suitable I love the music to your intro very very eery.. nice work with it.

Your animation doesnt quite seem like its at a level that a person whos been doing flash for 6 years would be. All of the characters movements seemed to be sketchy and mechanical perhaps more fluid movements will compliment your artwork.

The Camera shots I found were to be quite good its what you would expect to see in a regular film although the artwork wasnt the best it looked slightly more professional since there were some sweeping movements of the action which gave it a 3-D like effect

I guess you were just working with what you got
nice job =)